Thursday, December 18, 2008

i know i've already asked some of you and you're on the verge of killing me


I NEED ALL OPINIONS



(a) background?
(b) are birds an issue?
-should i do them burnt sienna gradients over the stuff i have now? more ink work?

with text.


sincerely,
kerstin

2 comments:

R said...

hey kerstin. i would definitely consider doing a background of some sort. the flower and cacti look good, but they are sinking into the background because of the white. i think a wash or two of some sort in the background would bring those elements forward. birds look fine too. fine-ass birds.

Andy said...

Hey Kerstin-
I agree-- a light inky wash would help make it not fade into the white.