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Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Johnny Cupcakes
Hi guys, Here's my final for the ad. Let me know if I should change anything, I might move the text to the bottom or make it more visible but I kinda like the placement of it. Thanks, Julie
3 comments:
Anonymous
said...
I like it-- try it on the bottom though, the comp is top heavy.
3 comments:
I like it-- try it on the bottom though, the comp is top heavy.
The text is transparent for some reason. I'd make it opaque and neaten it up a bit, it's a little sloppy around the edges.
Julie this is beautiful, your painting of the figure is so nice. Maybe try and beef up the 3Dimensionality of the frosting. But that is nit-picking.
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